My Little Brother

by Carmen   Feb 13, 2005


I talked to my little brother today,
Just playing around, not expecting to learn anything.
Now I just pray,
Because now the pain in my heart will just sing.

I pretended like I was a counselor,
Asking a few little questions here and there.
I never knew of the little predators,
Treating him so unfair.

He's quiet and shy,
Barely bothering anybody.
As I listen to his story, I just sit and sigh.
I feel myself getting moody.

They made fun of him,
Treating him like a dog.
The main contributor was named Tim,
His conscience overridden by fog.

He said they say cruel words,
And hit him and touch him unwantingly.
This of course cuts me like a hundred sharp shards,
My body numbing.

I wanted to help,
But knew I couldn't.
I started crying to myself,
I hoped I wouldn't.

Yesterday he hurt his finger,
From another of those monsters.
If they get any meaner,
They will eventually pay faster.

I told my parents what was happening,
And they talked to his teacher.
He said he will stop this wrong,
And I finally felt stronger.

His teacher fixed those boys,
They left him alone.
He now plays with his toys,
He no longer moans.

I finally got what I wanted,
Something for which I'd go the extra mile.
He was no longer the hunted,
He then wore a big, bright smile.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I loved the idea behind this it's really awesome to see you caring so much about your little brother i mean i would too but still its touching lol, im very glad that you got it to stop, i know what it's like to be bullied so yeah it's hard so good job. as for the poem the flow is choppy and sometimes you tried to rhyme words that just don't rhyme like anybody and moody and monsters and faster and there's a lot more, but yeah imma give this a 4/5 loved the idea lots, but your flow was choppy and the rhyming was off

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Very touching. I like your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by -Erin-

    Awww how sweet.
    another wonderful poem ^.^

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    I adored the ending of this one! nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    great, what else is there to say? You can really write!