by Heather M Craig Feb 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Cried Myself To Sleep With The Pain In My Heart, |
by bluehun
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ALWAYS ONE THAT LEAVES BAD VIBES AROUND,WELL I THINK IT WAS GREAT DAVID WHO REALLY GIVES A MONKEY`S FLYING FLICK ABOUT LINES ETC ETC EVERYONE HAS THERE OWN WAYS 5 /5 |
by Minkus
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Good, but I think the length of the lines while reading them needs a little more consistency. Good theme though! |
by Ann Stareyes
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Heather, A very beautiful passionate love poem. Always open your heart through your writings, it sure eases some of the pain. lol |