I Hate You

by Carmen   Feb 21, 2005


I hate you,
For what you did.
You thought it was funny,
You thought it was just a kidd.

I hate you,
For I was the object of your ridicule.
Just to dodge the pain,
Was my biggest obstacle.

I hate you,
For flirting with my friend.
You'd never believe
The hatred that I send.

I hate you,
And her too.
She laughs and smiles,
While I stand here like a fool.

I hate you,
For not choosing me.
I look around for some hope,
But you are all I see.

I hate you,
because I gave you my heart.
You took it,
But you just ripped it apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I loved this i hate you is such a powerful sentence and you used it well i loved the repitition this was my favorite poems of yours great job this was excellent 5/5 the last stanza concluded it so well ahh i love this lol great job

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ok I think that you got ALL of your feelings out in this one, I wouldn't want to be your enemy =0) great poem, very deep and emotional...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by -Erin-

    Good poem ^.^
    </3 Erin

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    It wasn't my favourites out of your peotry but it was still pretty good! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    awww this was soo good it sounds like something that i just recently went through but i don't hate they guy i'm still in the denial part of how and why he left me ya know anyways great poem 5/5

    Ttyl
    Maddy

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