To God

by Heather M Craig   Feb 24, 2005


Dear God of heavens divine,
I say a prayer for the world tonight,
for the lost broken ones
who forget all You've done.
The smallest of creatures
who feel such large pain,
please guide their souls
with all You can hold.
Bring forth Your children,
each and every heart of theirs.
God, I ask You to hold them close,
The ones who love you least but need You most.

-© Heather M Craig-

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  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    Hey Heather

    i read ur writing,n love it as a prayer ,which is cool(Prayer in a shape of poem) thats nice indeed.

    ur last 2 lines where amazing,so deep n true,u were right about those people who love God a little,coz its them who really need god to get into their life n bright it up for them !

    Nice one and nice ideas :)

    Peace-Always-
    Darla

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I liked this entire poem, but that last line is poetic brilliance! Very insightful! Keep up the amazing work~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Great one.Nicely Written...

    Chris

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Seemed more like a prayer then a poem. But all in all...wow once again, i know your not your typical 16 year old. Your poems are way too advanced for your age level, you should become a writer or a poet for sure heather dear.

    Five/Five

    P.S. Thank you for your comment and email...i now not all girls/woman are like that, but it seems the ones i meet are anyways..maybe i am the one to blame i don't know, but either way. Great Job

    Five/Five

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, beautiful poem that touched my heart. Great job, hugs to you, lol Ann

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