Hit-man

by Heather M Craig   Feb 28, 2005


A facade of black hue
luring me in with words,
spoken of love divine
to break me down with hurt.

The double life of him
held mystery of the eyes.
I was blinded by the smile
until he unveiled his lies.

The black of his heart
with never a trace of shame,
his hands led him forward
to play such a deadly game.

Sharp physcotic dreams
exists in the mind of a killer.
The feeling is unreal to me,
like turning pages of a thriller.

The words eat through me,
enough to dine on my organ.
Destruction of the misguided,
I fell in love with a hitman.

-Heather M Craig-

*This is true but I don't know if I loved him for he threatened my life. The poem is weak, yes, I know (not one of my best) but I needed to get these reticent feelings out and in the open.* vote and comment if your heart desires.

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I don't think this is weak, however I do agree, not one of your best! But I did like the mystery and you always have such an unusual way with words. Love & Peace~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i love it, creative, being involoved with a hitman sounds scary, wouldn't ever want to piss them off of course, just take care, and if someone threaten to kill you i strongly sugest you get out of the relationship if you havn't already because it might end up deadly and that wouldn't be good! take care, your friend, PLP thanks for the comment!

    ~lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by Knight_of_Blackrose

    That wasn't weak at all... and you know my thoughts on Mr. Skip Tracer! You have a nice sized show of support on this one... See everyone has friends.... although, some people have friends in low places. Or friends in certain interesting states...lol
    Later hun.... btw I'm on day turn now.
    Aaron

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    I didn't think that was weak at all. I hope you're okay! Take care <33 Erin

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    it was realy good it wasnt weak i liked it but i agree with Dark Savoir becarfull hunzzz take careee
    love yaa
    peaceee

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