The feel of snow

by Fear2love   Mar 16, 2005


Dust of snow
give me feeling that
would never be real
I can't underestimate
the united clouds
that releases this wounder
I wounder if it's real
to be one with the snow
I grow up into a young man
as snow stay stunning
like a painting
painting a picture in
the sky while my soul
fly into this masterpiece
never to loose it's touch
as it touch my heart

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  • 15 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This is so descriptive and beautiful! I LOVE it!

    ...I wish it snowed where I live in Texas... =P

    --Hannah

  • 17 years ago

    by Sora

    Whoaa! this poem was amazing. the most beautiful thing i've read all day. simply lovely. i loved this piece it was a unique style of writing, and the subject was creative. you have a wonderful imagination. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Snow is pretty damn awesome.

  • 17 years ago

    by Riffy

    Wow!
    This is so great, I love the imagery you managed to creat with your choice of words. So calm and just beautiful
    5/5
    xxx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was very creative
    Great job!
    5/5

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