by Dawn Manna Mar 18, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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You broke my heart |
by Cella Bella
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Now this I can relate to. I also liked the use of questions here. 5/5 |
by Kevin
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I thought it was good but the flow got a littlemessed up in a few spots...veryheartfelt though |
by Emma
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You tell it girl...I understand where you're coming from. Great poem : ) |
by LadyPearl
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Good job though not exactly my style. |
by Brookeღ
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I liked the use of questions! Way to let it out in the ending! Good job! Take Care! Brooke~ |