Dear God

by Dawn Manna   Mar 18, 2005


I met a guy today
He took my breath away
He had the sexiest smile
He came over and we talked for a while
He was really smart and sweet
The kind of guy a girl hopes to meet
He told me he would like to get to know me
I looked at him playfully and said well see
When our eyes met, sparks began to fly
And to think at first he was so shy
Before he left, I wanted to kiss him
Oh dear lord, how I miss him!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    Wow i love this poem it rhymes naturally. . .Maybe that "well" should be "We'll" which is how i read it. . and it made sense. . .

    good job

    laura
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Hehe...thats cute. I like this : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    I looked at him playfully and said well see

    the 'well see' part does not make sense to me is all.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    It's okay. It lacked emotions

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Great crush discription, well done

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