Commitment

by Heather M Craig   Mar 21, 2005


I lived the life in ultimate fear
commitment of reality.
I wanted to live the fairytales
that belonged to fantasy.

When my soul was intertwined
with the essence of yours,
two broken hearts in fear
were suddenly matured.

I stepped out of my shadows
and faced commitment in the eye.
I won the fight with the fear,
he was released denied.

My heart has been repaired,
love filled commitment's holes.
The beauty of my life in him,
my carrier of heart and soul.

I am a part of commitment dream,
the happiness finally made undo,
finally found in your beautiful eyes,
I owe every smile to you.

Heather M Craig

-of course, it's inspired by Shaun :) sorry for tonight, baby...but I realized everything now

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    sniff sniff.....thats so sweet, and you seem so happy......i hope everything works out for you guys, and i'm glad you are this happy......even though i don't know you personally lol.......take care, and good luck =)

    -brittnay-

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    You sound very happy Heather. I'm glad to hear that. Good luck with you and Shaun!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great poem 5/5. PLP

    ~lil slam~ lots of hugs~

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Thank you for writing a poem, but if you keep writing poems about me i am going to try and match it and i don't think i can. Only sadness i can master. I was called "The King of Sad poems" so i guess that makes you my opposite "The Queen Of Love Poems"

    Of course i forgive her, how could i not.

    Love you always,
    Your boyfriend,
    Shaun.

    P.S. five out of five for an awesome subject haha jp.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    beautifully inspired poem!! the love you write seems so happy like nothing could interfere...i hope that nothing does because you deserve to be happy and i am so glad for you!!

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