You Cheated In A Cheap Hotel

by Emilia   Mar 26, 2005


You are in this cheap hotel near San Francisco bay
I thought you did love me but I was wrong, anyway
You drank all the cheap whiskey you bought from the cheap store
You can’t remember anything from the night before
You woke up laying next to another cheap hore
Won’t you ever learn will it always stay the same

I have been calling you all night at the cheap hotel
Everyone knows, go to hell
I didn’t know you were with her and wanted to stay
I wish I could say this in a different way

I don’t want to be with you anymore
I wish everything could be like it was before
When you loved only me
And not all the girls you wanted me to be
But it’s to late for excuses now to late darling goodbye!

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  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    awesome emotion.....Im glad you ended it

  • 19 years ago

    by Mel

    I really like you style and I like your confessional ability. Check out the few Ive written if you would. What do you think?

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Thare are bits and pieces of good writing here but it's so choppy and it hard to really get into it if your going to rythm let it flow if not just write I hope I am making some sense here

  • 19 years ago

    by UM

    Good message and there is alot of emotion packed into it...the flow/rythym of it isn't consistent. That would be my only suggestion to make it better. Good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Great feelings. the anger realy comes through.