Comments : The Nights of the Lost Song

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    this is a beautiful poem, very very very well written, i especially like the 10th stanza, the hole poem is really descriptive and very original. great work xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I'm speechless, can't believe how well written this is, though it's very looooong!!! It started out being so happy, but ended up so sad, I really like that twist!!! Beautiful poem...definately 5

  • 19 years ago

    by lifes big mistake

    cant believe that ive just read all of that it was amzing i was so taken it by it all take care xxxx well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    kick ass poem...f**king ruled...i dont know what else to say...but that its really long...and i must agree with the person before me...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Vanessa

    omg that was so sad....it was very interesting though..nice work... :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Oh... I am sure all your reviews have mentioned this: but that was a sad yet beautiful poem!
    I enjoyed every word of it; it had a unique and easy flow, the stanzas rolling together comfortably. The symbolic messages you used were terrific.
    I completely loved the theme of the singing lady, alone, yet finding someone to love. A tragic ending it may of been; but a truly remarkable love journey.
    I immensely admire this piece. It was long, yes, and I almost lost interest, but it was worth the patient read.
    very talented. A surreal journey into a fantasy world that would exist only in our dreams.
    "Then down from the height she slowly came,
    her eyes fixed upon his,
    and under the moon and the dark, sparkling sky,
    she gave him a tender kiss."
    That was my favourite stanza in this piece of poetic art.
    A definite 5/5 from me!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    sooo good! keep up the good job =)
    I voted a 5 for this one! take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    oh my lord that was a long poems but yet it was so great awesome really i cant even let out a word!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    My god, if i could write like that I would always be smiling. You have a great tallent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jeff

    Great talent.I loved this one.Keep it up.Jeff

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    thats a wonderful poem . luv it. keep it up 5/5
    luv
    nida

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    It was a bit long, but its a beautiful poem. Happy yet sad. Good job. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • wow that is incredible and a greta read. an amzing narative poem although bvery sad

    Jemma

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Thanks for your comments. I only write about my true feelings because it helps me to deal with them thats all. I haven't got round to writing about other things yet. Amanda :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Like ur poems. Maybe i'll be as good as you someday :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Wow beautiful. I love poems like this, so beautiful and it must have taken forever writing. Loved it, keep on writing and take care.
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    Awfully wonderful poem.
    "as he saw her loose her life
    " Loose should be Lose. Anyway, great write - I dunno why, but reminded me of Ireland. 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    "and dark-brown was her sparkling eyes"

    Was should be were.

    Only technical comment I have, other than the fact that you have two stanzas near the end but closer to the middle that are sorta...sagging...compared to the rest. (12 from the end)

    Otherwise, greatly creative. Very good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    yes the poem reads like an enchanting story i enjoyed it

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    WOW i think readin all that just killed me! I have goosebumps.. loved this poem!!!!
    KT xx