The pains inside ©

I liked that but the last line doesn't seem like a ending it sounds more like an introduction, i think you should elabarate from that line about all the pain in side, you know how you feel, what caused maybe, that type of thing but i loved it anyways it was brilliant and i gave it 5 because it's short but it's good and has potentential to be one of the best i think if you make it longer.

wow great poem! really short but gets the point across with sum extremely strong words! great job!

short powerful and amazing! I loved it
goood job... i think u should expand that poem into a longer one!! itwould be like 10 times more amazing
stay strong always

OooOo my Georgi, meatball hoagie, it was teeeeerrrriifffiic!!!! lol, very, very short, but lovable nonetheless. lol, love you lots.

ooh, i like this. short but still full of meaning and catchy. great poem!