Gently rippled water ©

by Georgi   Mar 29, 2005


Gently rippled water,
fingers gliding through,
I, the deep pools daughter,
my protection of light blue.

water wraps around me,
holding me so tight,
takes me as what it sees,
without judgement or a fight.

holds me like a mother,
would hold her newborn child,
wouldnt leave for any other,
she saw the scars and smiled.

holds me above the pain,
stops me from going under,
accepts the bloodred vein,
controls the scary thunder.

accepts all of the fears,
does not ask how or why
i love being in that water,
Cause no one sees you cry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    "child, smiled" this way of rhyming shows your creativity. You need to make "bloodred" a hyphenated word as blood-red. Nevertheless the poem is outstanding.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Very deep...it had a very natural flow. The last stanza really brought the entire piece together! Well done~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    Aw I love this!! Its really good, and very descriptive. Well done! And thanks for commenting on my poem. Check out some of my other stuff when you get the chance. Thanks take care x

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy-Rae

    I liked how you described everything. This ones very good. Keep up the good work and stay strong! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel Fink

    Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

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