Don't trust a liar

by BleedingAngel   Mar 30, 2005


He left her for another
and won't come back, so don't even bother
He took her world with him, as he slammed the door
she haven't had her heart broken before
He held her as she cried
but when he let her go, she could have died
He was everything she ever had
something so good could make her sad
She never saw it coming, she was too blind
couldn't keep something so hard to find
she begged on her knees, tried to hold on
but neither did it help and now he's gone
He once promised that their love would last
but that promise died way too fast
he never meant what he said
he was seeing another girl instead
but some day another man will make her smile
and once again make her life worthwhile

I know it's bad.....I wrote it a few years ago, but decided to submit it any way!

Copyright 2005 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 19 years ago

    by UM

    This poem wasn't that bad, you just need to proofread it and fix spelling and grammatical errors. Maybe organize it into stanzas. I liked this poem alot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mel

    Hey, you......I like your style and honesty. Poetry is something good to come out of pain, I guess. Check my few poems out and feel free to comment.

  • i know you said you think it's bad but i really liked it, well done

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    its very good... sorry Ive been away for a while so Ive only just got the chance to catch up on everyone :D well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Alex

    I really enjoyed reading this. well done even if it was written awhile ago it is still good.