The Flame Within

by Heather M Craig   Mar 31, 2005


To be loved and wanted
is the barrier of dreams.
Repetitive rejection
ripped the heart's seams.

Your heart given freely
but the offer was stood up.
With your head in the clouds,
your soul yearns for love.

Patience is your virtue
of the love yet to retain.
I know she's in waiting
to demolish your pain.

I know your heart is broken
but in time, it'll mend.
The sparkles of her eyes
will extinguish "The flame within".

Heather M Craig

--Okay, so, again, not one of my best , just sitting in the living room this morning thinking about some things Nick told me about how he yearns for that love...so my message to him is "Never give up in looking for your angel in waiting, there's nothing wrong with you babe, any girl would be lucky to have you!" keep smiling! Love ya!--Also, Nick is "The Flame Within" on this site...hence the ending=P--

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sammi

    its amazing what you on! Loadsa hidden meanings with alot of hidden passion! You have a lot of hidden talent!

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Heather~
    You have such an amazing way with words...truly unique! Beautifully written as always~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent poem, Heather.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    you must be doing something right if this poem has a 5.0 rating with 11 votes because if you think this isn't your best, well surprize it's great i love it!!! beautiful! just to tell you i'm going to b on break for a while so i probably won't be on for a week.

    ~lil slam~ take care PLP

  • 19 years ago

    by Phoenix

    I thought that was fantastic,Peace