Bloody Moon

by ~*LorienElf*~   Apr 3, 2005


My world is crashing down
There's no place left to go
Everywhere I turn
All I see is blood a flow

So now I journey up
To my special place to hide
Where I can watch my life unfold
And think of all the tears I've cried

I drift far above the earth
And the clouds filled with rain
Above all my troubles
Above all my pain

Up to the silvery moon I fly
And take my cold seat
Where I watch my life from afar
In my lonely retreat

I'm on top of the world
The pain can't possibly reach me here
I've left all my troubles behind
And I keep my shining moon near

But then I chance a look down
And see me lying there
A lifeless body soaked in blood
With cuts leaking tears and despair

The pain was too much for me
But I sense it isn't yet done
It will follow me up here
Until it has finally won

Suddenly the moon turns crimson
Blood dripping down on my head
I realize there is no escape
Until at long last I'm dead

But I will not let the pain eat me away
I will not let it endure
For this horrid ailment
There is only one final cure

I pull forth a shining dagger
And stab it through my heart
The blood rains down upon the earth
The dagger has done its part

My body slowly disappears
But the moon remains up high
A reminder of my fatal strife
Now bloodstained in the sky

votes and comments please

*inspired by a picture of the anime dark chii

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    My favorite one of yours so far, near perfect rhyme. I commend you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! very dark and beautiful! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very creative poem its flows well I enjoyed reading it

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    "Bloody Moon" ......wow, thats very thought provoking and creative! keep it up 5/5

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