A Broken Life

by Alicia Biter   Apr 12, 2005


All she wants is to use the knife
use the knife to take her life
all of her new found depression
is because of a worthless obsession
she isn't sure whether or not he ever truly cared
or is he just saying and doing these things because he's scared
she wonders whether he would see
see that she loved him endlessly
she gave him all she had
she was willing to take the good with the bad
but he closed the door
told her that she shouldn't try anymore
when this was said her heart broke
she hoped it was only a joke
so now she wants to take her life
because of all her new found strife
she wants to pay him back
so sorry that what he wanted, she lacked
she puts the knife to her wrist
and slowly starts to make the slits
and as she slowly starts to die
she wonders if he would even cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bursonater

    That is really good,
    i didnt expect it to have a story at the start but then it just seemed to fit so well, i really liked it, the flow was exquisite and well it was just a wonderful piece

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This was very sad...and well done....but sorry for me it was jsut another cutting poem and wasnt very outstanding or special for me...4/5 your a great writer though...so keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Seductive

    if this is true never let a guy drive u 2 ur death, my guy just told me he is scared thats why he acts like an ass, but nice 1!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rocky

    nice poem, plz check out some of mine

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Hey i enjoyed this alot more.. i just thought your poem was generally too sophisticated to have the word silly in it.. it's Tait by the way!
    Nice improvement!!
    kt xx

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