War of Celts

Not my real first but the other is on a diff comp please tell me how it is and what i can do to help it more

All of us cry
All seeing the blood of war
More of them lie
Death, bodies and gore

We all tried to hide
Our group of gun less teens
Some many of us died
And so few of us had wins

The bullets flew
We ducked, dodged and ran
Last breathes blew
And at least the day had began

It came so swiftly
They cried like a baby
All seemed nifty
A win there might be maybe

Here he is here
At last they finally run
The wars end is near
We now have the guns

The pain and tears
Of our lost friends and loves
Will be forever here
But memories will fly with doves