Without

by Carmen   Apr 14, 2005


Without your touch, I cannot feel.
Without your lips against mine,
Sweet as the taste of wine;
Without our hands entwined together,
Without us being bound forever.
Without your touch, I cannot feel.

Without your voice, i cannot hear.
Without your beautiful voice,
Forcing me to make a choice;
Without the sound of my heart,
When your cute little whispers begin to start.
Without your voice, I cannot hear.

Without you in my sight, I cannot see.
Without seeing your wonderful face,
The way you walk with every bit of grace;
Without seeing sparkling smile,
I hope it'll stay for a very long while.
Without you in my sight, I cannot see.

Without your scent, I cannot smell.
Without the smell of your cologne,
So very special, you make it your own;
Without the soft, manly scent of your hair,
Nobody can help but stare.
Without your scent, I cannot smell.

Without your breath, I cannot breathe.
Without feeling you hear,
Knowing your nowhere near;
Without feeling your life,
I try, but I just can't strife.
Without your breath, I cannot breathe.

Without your love, I cannot live.
Gasping for air,
Knowing you don't care,
Without you here,
I have everything to fear.
Without your love, I cannot live.

Without you,
I don't know what I'd do.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Sooo sweet. loved everything about the poem. your really good at writting and you put so much feeling into ur poetry. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was awesome 5/5 definatly the only part i saw a problem with was this

    Without feeling your life,
    I try, but I just can't strife.

    it dosn't really make sense because im pretty sure strife is a noun not a verb and strife is a bad thing, defined as like a bitter conflict or i think a problem between people that don't exactly like each other so that dosn't really make any sense i know there's only like 3 or 4 words that rhyme with life but i bet you could find one that makes sense so i'd redo that part but yeah great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Aw this is really sweet....im glad you got some1 to love and who ever this was for....lucky person!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    aww this is a sweet poem. i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Touching poem...but i'd have to agree, it seems to be a little too redundant...I liked the "without your..." part being repeated...a few parts could perhaps be edited out. But it's your poem. Do whatever you feel is best. ;)