by Carmen Apr 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Without your touch, I cannot feel. |
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Sooo sweet. loved everything about the poem. your really good at writting and you put so much feeling into ur poetry. keep up the good work. 5/5 |
by Jamie
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This was awesome 5/5 definatly the only part i saw a problem with was this |
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Aw this is really sweet....im glad you got some1 to love and who ever this was for....lucky person!! 5/5 |
by Andrea
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aww this is a sweet poem. i loved it |
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Touching poem...but i'd have to agree, it seems to be a little too redundant...I liked the "without your..." part being repeated...a few parts could perhaps be edited out. But it's your poem. Do whatever you feel is best. ;) |