My Bratty Horse

by VampyraKi†   Apr 16, 2005


Well this is dedicated to my baby Gimli he is my horse and I am not lying about any he is the biggest brat but I love him

I have a horse
His name is Gimli
I think he's a demon spawn
And was sent to me

You try to feed him
And he'll kick and bite
And trying to ride him
Is beyond a fight

He maybe Hell sent
But i don't care much
He's my miracle horse
And I love him a bunch

Ask Jason, he knows I think Gimmy almost kicked him I had to have one to my horse.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    lol have u ever ridden him? good poem! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Hehe, it was cute..and I can picture the horse very well. Like Robert said, you could revise it, but other than that there's nothing wrong with it. Take care,
    Dorotea

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    He did indeed almost kick me, but hey...I don't need that leg...do I? Perfect poem to the brat. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    This is a cute poem and nice to read., But I think if you wanted to submit this work I would revise it . Personally I would reword alot of it but, then again that is me. I got it put it away and reread it in a year I think your work would be alot more better...

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    short but sweet i love it
    ~Freak~

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