Suicide

by ღ*KiM*ღ   Apr 18, 2005


I sit here alone
As I reach for the knife
I've had enough
Time to end my life

I sit here alone
And take 16 pills
Just incase
My knife attempt falls

I sit here alone
Put the knife to my wrist
Slowly draw a line
I become an artist

I sit here alone
Watching the red
It drips down my hand
Lands on the bed

I sit here alone
My senses all stop
I feel myself fall
Fall through the black drop

I sit here alone
And think this is it
My troubles are pouring
Out of this slit

I sit here alone
My troubles are gone
Theres nothing else here
Able to go wrong

I sit here alone
Where my wrist has cried
Tonight was the night
I finally died

*Not suicidal*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I re-read your poem to refreash my mind of what a good poet you are :)

    I still loved it :)

    And if you want me to read any others just post them in the request section under FREE RATE AND COMMENT...

    love you :)^^^and pass the word xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    A enlightining poem which gets me thinking. Just one point though the stanza which reads:

    I sit here alone
    And take 16 pills
    Just incase
    My knife attempt falls

    I would have put the last line as 'My knife attempt fails' as I feel if fits the rhyme scheme better. Still worth the read though.

    Stay Inspired
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgi

    this is so sad, how do u no exactly what suicidal ppl feel like !?! its so good and rly affective keep it up! xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    That was a very sad poem! PLz dont cut ur self! 5.0 on the poem! Thanx for giving me adivce in the discussion thing (moving on...but changing?)

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    Thats a really good poem :) espeshially for someone who isnt suicidal :) xoxoxox

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