Dear Diary...

by Gem   Apr 27, 2005


(Feel free to give me your feedback. This is the longest poem i've ever done, and i'm quite proud of it. Thankyou!)

Dear Diary
I saw him again today,
I haven't seen him for a while.
He turned around and looked at me,
And he gave me a smile.
My heart skipped a beat,
And a shiver down my spine.
Butterflies in my stomach,
I wish that he was mine.

Dear Diary
Oh my god, I'm so excited,
Diary, i can hardly write!
That brown eyed boy i like so much,
Has finally seen the light!
He asked me for my number,
And he said that he would call.
He said he wants to take me out,
For a milkshake at the mall.

Dear Diary
I'm now officially his girlfriend,
It seems to good to be true.
I couldn't wipe the smile from my face,
Even if i wanted to!
We spend our days together,
And at nights look at the stars.
I wish that everybody in the world,
Had a love like ours.

Dear Diary
Guess what? I'm getting married!
Diary, i have to tell you this!
Something metallic popped in my mouth,
When he gave me a kiss.
It was the most beautiful ring,
It was the perfect day.
I'd better go plan my wedding now,
Cause it's next month in May!

Dear Diary
I can hardly see through my tears,
Diary it hurts so very bad.
My fiance, the love of my life,
has died. I heard it from his dad.
Three years of bliss and love has perished,
Because of one drunken man.
The wedding has now become a funeral,
So much for all our plans.

Dear Diary
I can't take it anymore diary,
I can't live without his love.
It's so unfair, angels took him away,
I'm going to join him up above.
I've taken an overdose of pills,
I feel faint, yet i don't cry.
I'll be with him soon forever more,
And we'll never say goodbye.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is amazing... one of the most beautiful poems I have read....
    i love the style... the imagery... the storyline..the description everything was perfect...
    The ending is really very hearfelt but still I felt happy that they will not have to say gudbye again :)...
    I also write diary.. but I never imagined that one could mix both diary and poetry....
    this is really amazing...

    Excellent job..

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Omg that was so beutiful, but so sad! tear tear! hehehh good job though!

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Ok ok ok i know how you feel on this one cause in my diary i always write about the boy i like and the one i WENT with but i dont know how it feel for the one youre gettind married to die because i never been close to gettin married but other than that its good. you are an excellent writer

  • 17 years ago

    by Animus

    That's another poem of your's that gave me chills.
    That's awful.
    Well done.
    -Animus

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This poem is pure beauty! I loved it so much! You are the best poet on this site! I loved it!
    xoxo