Even Though...(For Shaun)

by Heather M Craig   Apr 29, 2005


--Shaun, Sorry I didn't keep my promises and I hurt you pretty bad, but I admit my myself and apologize but I wish you luck in the future!

I feel your pain within me....
every piece that fell from your heart
and even though I could of mended it,
I managed to just rip it apart.

I hear your prayers....
I've found all the hope you lost
and even though I could return it,
I keep it at my own cost.

I saw the tears....
every drop that fell from your eyes
and even though I could of dried them,
I ceased to even try.

I smelt the embers....
that were left from your mind
and even though I could of extinguished the fire,
I left it behind.

I tasted the darkness.....
that melted the light of your soul.
and even though I could of recaptured it,
I chose to let it go.

Heather M Craig.

--yeah, it's not my usual poem, but if you haven't noticed it's derived from the 5 senses =)--

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  • 18 years ago

    by Trevor

    totally beautiful, sad but its admitting your own faults which is so much harder than laying the blame on others. amazing work. you can write whatever style you want. loved it.
    trevor--

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    Heather
    You are absoutly the most creative writer, I think I've ever read. Your poem was wonderful.......I did get the 5 senses, and that was brillant.....Hope you both are Ok, and I will keep you in my prayers. Thanks Love ya Becky

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    aww heather....im sorry things didnt work out =(....im here if you wanna talk or anything...but im sure you have plenty of people to talk to lol...i like how you used the 5 senses as well, very creative....this is another brilliant piece of work =), keep it up...take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Lots of emotion and beautifully written. Great job once again. Keep it up. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    grt poem hunz:D
    full off emtions
    always smile
    peaceeeee love yaaaa

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