In her Journal

by Kit Kat Katie   May 14, 2005


In her journal
that little girl writes
Everything that went on that day
Every single fight

In her journal
The stains are of tears
She crys every time
A footstep comes near

In her journal
She writes down her thoughts
As she watches her mother
Take shot after shot

In her journal
She writes down each day
In the blood of the cuts
That takes the pain away

In her journal
It says her last day
Was sitting in the sand
By the water near the Bay

In her journal
That little girl writes
"I wish it may happen
Just maybe it might!

In her journal
she writes one more line
I'm really sorry
But now is my time

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  • 16 years ago

    by shelby lynne

    This was awesome
    :o)
    Loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WOW! What a powerful poem. I am so against self harm but this poem just shouts out at me...I feel like in a way you are portraying the journal as a call for help…as the journal is the only one that knows of her terrible plight. Normally I would say the repetition of one line can be overwhelming but you definitely make it work in this piece. I love it...excellent write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    It's sad . but I liked it .. flowed well . I liked it .. its one of the best I have read so far !
    April` 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    It's aasd . but I liked it .. flowed well . I liked it .. its one of the best I have read so far !
    April` 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lushed

    the repetition again is a tool you use really well.
    your work leaves a very strong emotion, and i beleive that you are a very talented writer
    keep it up