Pain's Remedy

by Heather M Craig   May 14, 2005


**Behind the poem...I was sitting on the porch tonight listening to a lot of depressing music & it reminded me so much of the way I used to feel with life & then I took a look at how everything changed when I faced my fears of love and commitment and replaced the solitude air with laughing friends, a loving boyfriend, and whole new and improved persona. Nothing is too strong for love to fight.... **
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Wrists scarred with crimson chains,
Imitated smiles to conceal the pain,
Alluring eyes that restrain the tears,
A tarnished heart laced with fears.
Appearing serene, the soul rages fire,
Raising others with death her secret desire.
Every breath is more hopeless than the last,
with every reviving of the dreadful past.
Stuck in your own imprisonment, yearning freedom
with only the belief you'll find it in nirvana's kingdom.
Instead, a more complex feeling breaks your fall,
----true love conquers all.

Heather M Craig

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    That was totally wicked, well done aye, i really liked it, and that bit you wrote up the top is how i feel now, i found what life is about, and i no to live it up while im here now, i gave you a 5 out of 5, you have so much talent!!
    xox Bam

  • 18 years ago

    by Child of God

    That was really good i think that might be my favorite one you've done im really inlove with that poem great job!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Very nicely done Heather! :-) Glad you posted some new ones I missed you! This is so amazing.. Keep em coming doll I love you
    -xx-
    Broken

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Beautiful! So full of feeling! Very well written I loved it! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Awesome write Heather. Keep it up girlfriend.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela