Life Is not Fair :.

by ღ Christina ღ   May 15, 2005


:. This is a poem that I think a lot of people can’t relate to… because I’m sure a lot of people suffer while others are happy! But whichever you are I would very much appreciate any comments and votes! Thanks! :.

Life Is not Fair
When the bad stuff happens to you
Like when you loose a best friend
That was always very true

Life Is not Fair
When someone has passed away
Because no matter who they are
You want them with you to stay

Life Is not Fair
When the people you love the most
Turn against you
And treat you like a ghost

Life Is not Fair
When you have lost a lot
Especially when you care about them
Because it was the best thing you’ve got

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    I think this would be a better poem if you took the time to look deeper into life and see the whole picture, But alas your still real young maybe you will see what I mean some day...

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    yeah i can relate to it. well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Yes I can relate to this. And a lot of other people can too. Great job. Keep it up.

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    so true, life isn't always fair, very well expressed. I loved the whole idea of the poem, you did a great job....And just like you said, alot of poeple can relate to this one and so can I!!! Keep up the good work!!!

    Please comment on my poem Alone...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You're right I think everyone can relate to this. I know life isn't always fair and it really can suck sometimes! Very good work! Really enjoyed reading this! Take Care! Brooke~

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