Never Go Away

by Robert   May 30, 2005


Talk to me in a whisper or a lisp of your voice,
see into my heart and know you have a choice.
Bare me the joy that only I shall see,
bind me with your love so I can set my fantacies free.
Tell me what you want from my life,
and I will stand by you through any strife.
Let our passion fuel our wanting love,
let us be together like the stars and skies above.
I wish to please you with all my might,
for seeing you happy is my one and only sight.
Taking away all of your pain with one touch of my hand,
and holding you so close as we walk in the together in a lover’s land.
Such a love I have invested in the woman that is you,
please tell do you love me as I do?
Fear not my love I will be with you forever and a day,
and with your permission I will never go away.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2004

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Exellent work once again nice job with the subject really nice xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "Let our passion fuel our wanting love,
    let us be together like the stars and skies above."

    ^^Loved those lines, such beautiful imagery and emotion.

    "for seeing you happy is my one and only sight."

    ^^ I didn't think that line worked that well, I know you were going with the rhyme scheme, but I think it might sound better if you change that to something else.

    "please tell do you love me as I do?"

    ^^I think that would flow better with something like:

    "Please tell me, do you love me like I love you?"

    There were a couple of spelling errors in this, but other than that, this was beautiful.

    I loved the depth and emotion in this, and overall it was a beautiful write.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Too obvious rhymes always ruin the impression for me. I prefer non- rhyming poetry because just a few of poets can be original when it comes to rhymes.
    Other that that, this was good read, very emotional and beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Really nice poem. I really liked it. It showed a lot of emotion n I can actually feel the love you have for this poem.

    Great job!!!

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    What a good poets robert... u do a great job well well well thanks for sharing ur poems i like it

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