Chaotic Resemblance

by Heather M Craig   Jun 1, 2005


Behind a mask of self glory
lies a heart of innocence,
a cowering soul that contributes
to the hunger of world vengencance.

Beneath the unconcerned exterior
lies honorable passions deep within
that must veil themselves
for exposure is vacant to intellectual sin.

Following the eyes that product harm
lies reticent protection and mystery
that must camoflauge their desire
to entertain the bitter cold society.

Underneath the sinister attire
lies a gorgeous heart in need
with broken shards misplaced
that has painfully journied.

After we strip society seen flaws
lies the alluring truth in he.
The being misunderstood by the world
is my object of partiality.

Heather M Craig.

--could be placed under a couple of categories so I just chose this one. It's dedicated to my boyfriend, about how society views him and how I see the truth deep within his heart.--

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this is deep! I've read it a few times now, each time something new caught my attention! Well done...Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, Beautiful and awesome job. We always need to take the time to look deep into people's heart otherwise we will never see the goodness and the truth that lies within. Loved it, Heather, love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by mayme

    good poem. I really like it-beautiful language, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful poem, society always views everyone differently cause they don't take the time to get to know the real person underneath. Awesome job Heather.......

    Smiles, hugs and love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Eden

    I like this poem a...lot....very well written. Superb word usage. Awesome how you depicted this character. I read it through a couple of times, each time finding something new about how to interpret it...very interesting. 5 for this one. tata, and keep up the beautiful work!...or else, haha.

    Eden