Within My Parent's Eyes

Great job. Excellent words. The entire thing flowed together. Again great job.

You really have a way with words. I know I feel like everything I have done in my life was never good enough. I have accomplished a lot but I have always been the black sheep of the family. I look forward to reading more of your work you have a lot of talent. ~Brooke~

This was a beautiful piece of work,you caught the readers attention, and held it, I kept thinking it would have a magical ending, but you know what, there is no magical endings, its just this thing we call "life".
If your parents could read this it would truly break their heart, as a parent I know we expect perfection, but not really we only want whats best for our chidren, and we think we know what that is, but the truth is we don't know either. thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece, and just know as a parent, I know your parents are always so proud of you, I think sometimes we get confused on the fact, that we can be so angry at someone, but that doesn't mean we stop loving them, unconditional love is just that, unconditional, and thats what it takes to be a good parent...see- you are so talented you get me going in 10 different directions with one little poem,hehehehe----you are good, never doubt yourself, or the love your parents have for you, love ya becky

I can totaly relate to this poem. Sum of my poems kinda talk about this. My parents act the same as well. Great poem! 5/5!

<3, Katie

wow, awesome poem. I really liked the flow and everything. Nice work. <3333