Everlasting Completion

by Heather M Craig   Jun 5, 2005


I write not for aspirations,
nor for society salutation
but because my pen moves with
the piercing whispers
of the voice submissive to my soul.
Her velvet breath confides
only
with the paper's mute reaction
for fears and intuition collide.
He melts her affliction
with each new single release,
He's the match that relights her solitaire dream
when drenched by the abomination of the uniformed universe....
When her lights have been disperesed,
the shadows and the wall converse
as she transforms to the obverse.
The attachment of his blank frame of lonliness
and her agonizing breath
form
the everlasting devotion
of spirit, esteem, and emotion...
with never the feeling of pain and overwhelm,
the only equality of this realm.
My friendship fabrication
created from thy imagination
the only completion
where soul and paper meet,
my heart's only escape from secretes.

Heather M Craig.
---I hope it's not too confusing... it's a poem of everlasting friendship where she=my heart , he=paper.--

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  • 18 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Speechless Heather my dear friend thats how this poem has left me. Brilliantly metaphorically put, I'm awe this piece was immaculate I have missed your poetry so much darling :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i think it's a very well writen poem, i wish i could say more but if i want to get some more read i can't

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    I really enjoyed this one (as per). Thank you for your last comment (as I'm sure you're aware) it's always nice to get feedback from poets you admire. I hope you are alsoe fine.

    (If I'm honest I escaped depression about a month ago. I still find writing about it a major release though.)

    All the best.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eden

    Not confusing at all. very very cool poem. Different from what you normally write, and it is really wellwritten at that. Thank you for all your comments, Heather, they mean a lot to me:)

    Eden