Chamber of Torture

by Heather M Craig   Jun 10, 2005


--free verse. its not my best, it came to me rather quickly--

Along the ebony wall
stand blunt spikes
that cut into your flesh...
bleeding porcelin.
Dragging chains
that bind human touch
handcuffing their straying hands
from the seduction.
Whips pierce their untouched bodies
forming blood drippings.
Spills and splatters
of the forced crimson ladders
they yearn for help
but the sinister forces
stole their voices
for the chamber of torture
is made to bleed you
from your soul
to rip away your wretched spirit of sin
for He has called upon you
to mutilate, to warp
your mind
and drain your body cold.

Heather M Craig.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    wow thats was the best free versepoem ive read in months your great as always
    taKE CARE
    HS
    p.s check out my new poems if you can i appreciate advice

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Vivid in such a dark way! Intriguing from beginning to end! Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Eden

    Hey, Heather. Sorry I missed you today. I will try and be on tomorrow night, okay? I got home from work around 12:30...yeah. So anywho, I left you a comment on your myspace thingymajig...so I'll ttyl, tata.

    Eden

  • 18 years ago

    by demongoddess120

    this is really good, i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    it doesn't matter how fast you made it, one of my best poem's was made in like 7 minuets! great job hun.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

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