Hold me while I'm sleeping,
hold me while I lay awake,
embrace me while we are all alone
the first kiss is all it takes.
Surprise me with your love,
when your lips touch mine,
all it takes is your simple touch
and chills run up my spine.
Get me all alone,
and I'll whisper you my dreams,
hopefully at the heat of the moment
you'll understand what they mean.
Lead to what it shouldn't
lead to what it may,
a closer relationship through the mind and body
getting better by the day.
Hugs in the morning,
kisses at night,
I love yous through the phone
no more I hate yous through the fights.
Now your holding me while I'm sleeping,
your holding me like words to a book,
your embracing me while were all alone
and the first kiss was all it took....
please rate and comment...I'll greatly return the favor..
This is a really beautiful poem. It had a good beat, a good choice of words, well written, and it flowed perfectly. This is the type of poem I am attempting to write at the moment but I find I am juts not very good at happy poem. :P. Go figure.
Anyway thank you for the comments me and my sister appreciate them.
Great poem, keep it up.
5/5 for sure