Hold me

by ♥kHarIsMa♥   Jun 19, 2005


Hold me while I'm sleeping,
hold me while I lay awake,
embrace me while we are all alone
the first kiss is all it takes.
Surprise me with your love,
when your lips touch mine,
all it takes is your simple touch
and chills run up my spine.
Get me all alone,
and I'll whisper you my dreams,
hopefully at the heat of the moment
you'll understand what they mean.
Lead to what it shouldn't
lead to what it may,
a closer relationship through the mind and body
getting better by the day.
Hugs in the morning,
kisses at night,
I love yous through the phone
no more I hate yous through the fights.
Now your holding me while I'm sleeping,
your holding me like words to a book,
your embracing me while were all alone
and the first kiss was all it took....

please rate and comment...I'll greatly return the favor..
thank you...!!

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  • 10 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Sweet poem like it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    This is a really beautiful poem. It had a good beat, a good choice of words, well written, and it flowed perfectly. This is the type of poem I am attempting to write at the moment but I find I am juts not very good at happy poem. :P. Go figure.
    Anyway thank you for the comments me and my sister appreciate them.
    Great poem, keep it up.
    5/5 for sure
    Breanna

  • 13 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I think this is a really beautiful piece.
    i really liked these lines:

    and I'll whisper you my dreams,
    hopefully at the heat of the moment
    you'll understand what they mean.

    and every other line lol!
    really loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by ~5*seconds*ago~

    Wow that was really good! i could feel it great flow of words too...overall 5.5

  • 13 years ago

    by Emma

    Awwe. i can completely relate to this. this is a great poem, and i love it.