This one girl 2

by Finalgravedigger   Jun 25, 2005


This poem will make more sense if you read the first one.

It was fine you rejected me but did you have to torch my heart. You had to tell you friends. You had to tell your friends. You had to throw me off the edge. You had to throw our friend ship. Just because I really liked you. You treated me like an enemy. And when you told your friends you friends your friends were like you little minions poking me with there little daggers. My mind was flipped I couldn’t think. There when I had fallen to the bottom of the hole I laid there. My grades flipped and with it even more problems. And you minions continued to torture me. I never knew it could turn like this but now I know

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is sad. im really sorry if this is true

  • 18 years ago

    by xMODEL

    Thanks for the comment on my one poem. I really enjoyed this poem, and the one before it. It reminds me of my ex. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sh**tingst*r

    Nice poem. Very dramatic!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    wow ... this is wayy more understandable ... but yeah ... i know how u feel .. good luck with that ... (5)
    xoxoxoxox
    -Viv

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    I READ QUITE A FEW OF YOUR POEMS THEYRE ALL REALLY GOOD I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL~ YOU CAN PROBLY RELATE TO THE POEMS I WROTE CALLED "THREE YEARS WASTED ON YOU" AND"WITHOUT A GOODBYE KISS" PLEASE READ AND COMMENT ON THEM. GREAT JOB ON YOUR POEMS
    ~LISA~