Good to see a poem with a moral behind it-dont ever take your own life and expect to get into heaven. Peace. X

wow what an intersting dark poem

This one is great.

This was sad, but written beautifully. Your such a good writer. Keep it up

A sad but great and very powerful poem i liked it alot def. a 5/5

Wow awesome, i have a thing for angels;0 Poems like this make me want to soar higher and higher lol. Good job.

Hi this is a brilliant poem, one of the best i've seen so far! Keep it up! luv Amy xXx

I loved the emotion. At 14 its hard to sort out everything you are feeling. Remember you are not your experience...you are who you believe.

i love it a lot! great details n great meaning!!!!

good writing, sad.. emotions everywhere ...

wow what an amazing poem, ive never seen a better suicide story.......well done hun!!!

*tear* beautifully written...love this one...it went unexpectantly...very nice.

"sain" should be spelled "sane"

xxx

wow...this is really good! i loved the ending! keep it up!

A unique poem once again very well written! You have a creative mind and for your age so much talent! Never stop writing! ~Brooke~

I loved that poem. I'm not one for suicide poems, but this was awesome. I love the part about having red wings. and it was a nice little twist at the end. beautiful imagery.

Take care,
Renee

OMG.. this was extremely touching.. ur words wer powerful and the rhyme was gr8.. and as u sed, u hv a message, and it is powerful.. i loved this line "an angel, i thought with a tear"..
gr8 job.. well done..
keep up the talent
nouna

This was a good poem all and all but it took more from a victims point of view. Good read but kinda left a sour taste in my mouth keepp it up you are well on your way...

ur words are something else im so amazed! 5/5 and you definitly deserver that rating for your creativity

loved it.. its a sad topic but those are my favs... good job, keep up the good work... 5/5
amanda

Eh it was alright i think i tired myself out on the last poem so i wont go go through this one flow once again was off

and i personally hate ending like this i think they are overused and not original

good idea though i give ya a 4/5