Behind this smile

by Arora   Jul 13, 2005


Behind this smile,
I'm not the same
Behind this smile,
I am the one to blame

Behind this smile,
Tears fall down
Behind this smile,
I'm a total meltdown

Behind this smile,
I cry and bleed
Behind this smile...
I want to be free

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  • 14 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Seems like a similar style I saw on your other poem...I like it. I wonder if you could do more with it though... keep writing ;)

    xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Britney

    Excellent poem! i ahve also faked a smile soo many times.. jus to make other people happy.. or to try n hide my pain.. anyways great rhyming n great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kia

    i like i like the repeating line, it could use a little more description but it was good easy to read... good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Simple and easily understood. Can pertain to anyone the way you wrote it. good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! Short and to the point. IT flowed great too. 5/5
    Much Love
    ~*hAiLy*~