I will not be a mistake

by amelia   Jul 27, 2005


We can still turn back
We can change our minds
No harm done
We can play it safe
And not let our feelings go
But if we fall into this ocean
And it carries us away
You should know

I will not be a mistake
Or something you have to forget
I can be the slightest breeze
That passes through your life
The smile that comes from thinking
Of me on a rainy night
I’ll be a chance you had to take
A heart you had to break
But I will not be a mistake

I can tell you now
That I hope we never
Say goodbye
But sometimes hearts collide
And then move on
You can say that we were foolish
It was reckless, it was weak
But it won’t be wrong

Let me love you with all I have
And if we let go then all I ask…

Is to be the slightest breeze
That passes through your life
The smile that comes from thinking
Of me on a rainy night
I’ll be a chance you had to take
A heart you had to break
But I will not be a mistake

You’re just moving on
but I got nights to remember
After you’re gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow, another great poem. Really enjoyed reading it. I liked your style, it was different and well done. The lines which i liked the most were:

    "I will not be a mistake
    Or something you have to forget
    I can be the slightest breeze
    That passes through your life
    The smile that comes from thinking
    Of me on a rainy night"

    Well said and good use of vocabulary. Definatly deserves a 5/5. Keep up the awesome work and never stop writing. Your a very taletned writer.
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I love the determination and beauty of this poem
    Well Done
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I really liked this one, it was beautiful, and sends a message. Sometimes the flow was abit off... but other then that, still beautiful! I really like it=D

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I like that you are forward about the things that you want! another awsum poem, i think i've read them all! can't wait to see some new work! well done once again......luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Your poems are all so wonderful.. it's amazing how you can go from a love poem to a lost love poem.. Keep up the amazing work...

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