Losing It

by A Broken Bleeding Soul   Jul 27, 2005


... for a friend...

You’re losing everything
Without realizing what’s gone
And you’re slipping slowly
You’re just barely holding on

Somehow I feel the pain
That you always feel inside
You may think that I don’t see
But it’s impossible to hide

Situations in our lives
Are just too messed up to say
But there’s nothing we can really do
Things just end up that way

Just stand up straight, chin up high
And believe that you are strong
Forget all of your hardships
And everything done wrong

Listen to me when I say
That this will all pass by
Suicide is not the answer
And I hope you understand why

Just remember me and think
How I’m scarred for life
Just because my best friend
Had to pick up that knife

So think about the people
That you will forever scar
Just because you weren’t strong
So you’ll escape to a place so far

Trust, I know how you feel
Because I’m not that strong too
But if we have each other
I know we’ll make it through

It’s just a phase we’re going through
Just give it a little time
Think of all the happy thoughts
Clear your troubled mind

Promise me one thing…
Just don’t do what I do
I just can’t stand to see
Everything I put you through

© Copyright 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    This was a really good poem, i wish someone would have written something like this for me. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    I was expecting it to be very sad like the other two i read, but it actually has a great message!!! this is my favorite of the three because of the message it sends out, and it flows well too. Good job!!! 5/5

  • your poems are so heart felt... i can relate to most of them in a way. i enjoy reading all of them, like ive said in other comments, your an amazing writer. i see your poems and im like omg...shes putting into words what i cant. i wish i could write like you =( haha yeh well this one was really good x

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey that was really good.. i guess its the way my best friend feels towards me.. the poem was really good..bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by allie

    very good!!! 5/5!!! i no how u feel my friend is startin to cut just cuz i had started.....she thinks its the only way!