My Last Breath

by Ren   Aug 1, 2005


I feel so weak.
My body is ready to give up.
I am trying to hang in there.
My family is counting on me.
I look at their sad faces.
Tears every where.
Blood, too.
I look around and realize...
I am lying in my own blood.
My body has gone numb.
I try to fight the white light,
That has crept closer to me in my mind.
I look up as my family holds my hands.
I try to talk but no words come out.
I look up at them...
The ones that loved me...
And finally I say "I love you guys...and I am so sorry."
Along with my last breath,
That stopped my beating heart.
Then I wake with a scream...
It was only a dream.

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  • 18 years ago

    by redxiii

    5/5 all the way i love the twist it was awesome keep writing i want to see more