Ghosting

by Ren   Feb 21, 2018


I wanted to love you
louder than your demons

…ever could…

To chase away
the fire and shadow

…for good…

But in all reality

…I meant nothing to you…

&

Little did I know

…you were just passing through…

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  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    Every line is speaking great things. The way you have lined up this write is really appreciable. The last line is giving a fine touch to this art:
    …you were just passing through…

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Nicely laid out, Ren. I do like your style!
    As for the content. Well, some people don't appreciate what they have, do they?

    Take care.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thanks so much! I really appreciate it :) take care!!

  • 1 year ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    This is a beautiful peice. Very well worded & flowed together perfectly. I can truly feel this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! <3

  • 1 year ago

    by Megan Chapman

    I love this Ren. Such sparing expression of such poignancy.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Kelz45

    Absolutely perfect

    I love your way of writing

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much!! I really appreciate it! And glad you enjoyed it :)

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