Ghosting

by Ren   Feb 21, 2018


I wanted to love you
louder than your demons

…ever could…

To chase away
the fire and shadow

…for good…

But in all reality

…I meant nothing to you…

&

Little did I know

…you were just passing through…

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  • 11 months ago

    by Kat

    I connect so well to this poem.

    I feel like so many people we meet are just chapters meant to help us "level up" in life. It may hurt terribly at first and we may not understand the reasoning behind things happening or people vanishing but eventually things happen that give you some kind of clarity.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Oh my gosh, yes! Absolutely! I agree :) the teachers appear when the student is ready, even if they don't appear the way we would hope or expect. It's a great way to look at it. Level up and keep that heart strong!! Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment! I appreciate it so much!

  • 3 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Every line is speaking great things. The way you have lined up this write is really appreciable. The last line is giving a fine touch to this art:
    …you were just passing through…

    • 3 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nicely laid out, Ren. I do like your style!
    As for the content. Well, some people don't appreciate what they have, do they?

    Take care.

    • 3 years ago

      by Ren

      Thanks so much! I really appreciate it :) take care!!

  • 3 years ago

    by BeachBlunt

    This is a beautiful peice. Very well worded & flowed together perfectly. I can truly feel this.

    • 3 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! <3

  • 3 years ago

    by Megan Chapman

    I love this Ren. Such sparing expression of such poignancy.

    • 3 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!

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