Grinder Of War

by Robert   Aug 2, 2005


An act that gives our children no way out,
because in boxes they come back stiff and stout.
We tell our children to honor family and nation,
but when its all over where is their salvation.
Lost in orders that bring morals to the very end,
where they have to kill others who may have been a friend.
For in the future what could one really say,
when we bare weapons to hunt humans as prey.
No talks to hold back the hammer of hate,
no in the bliss of blood letting we seal our fate.
Rape of mind and body the winner becomes master and lord,
baring down on the weak and stacking the dead cord after cord.
Bodies build a tower to testify to the winners might,
but in the darkness of all lives involved is an unyielding sight.
Anyone that sleeps could dismiss as real,
for every vision of life in which we kill.
All for County, family, and freedom that must survive,
only to let the true machines of war thrive.
The grinder of war built on blood and steel crushing every bone,
will never stop until we are all alone.
War fueled by misunderstanding, religion, and greed,
take hold of our minds and make our children bleed.
Government telling us to stay strong,
but they shelter their young now is that wrong?
So before you go in thinking that the government is right,
you better look at all the angles and see the plight.
For you have to do what is said,
because if you don't then you too will be dead.
In life can you live with what you have done,
for in the end you will be judged by only one.

Written By
Robert Le Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    This comes across as very against all forms of warfare, personally I am in favour of war for a dedicated reason.

    So for that part I will not comment on the content, but rather the writing style.
    You seemt o have a very knowledgable insight into life. Very opinionated in your poetry which will win you alot of plaudits.

    The structure is something that bothers me again in this piece. Too much text all at once.

    Overall good job.

    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very good poem i liked it
    serious depth
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    I dont know what to say other then 5/5 hun. Very good flow, the wording was flawless, and the lines were great. Keep it up.
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    The scenarios, metaphors and descriptions in this piece are outstanding. I like your wordings and its having the lexical power. Great 5/5 work

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!...great write!....so true....u penned the message beautifully...the idea was different Yet came out well

    Great job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx