My Pure

by Patrik   Aug 4, 2005


My pure,
I really don't care,
As long as you are near,
I no longer need to feel any fear,
So please just stay with me for the entier night,
Wait with me until the break of light,
Please don't leave in a fight,
Because you simply are,
My pure.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Very nice poem!
    You just feel all the emotions through the word who flow so great!
    I sure love it!

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl very sweet. I wish a guy wrote a poem about me like that lol. Anyways it was short but thats fine because it all went together perfectly. I enjoyed reading this one alot. good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by bucky

    short but sweet ... i am liking ur poems i think i will check out a few more

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    you certainly have an interesting way of writing. i tried doing that before but it just dont work..lol! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Well, it's certainly an interesting idea, and very unique. I like how you write a lot.

    Thanks for the great comments, also. :)

    You're an awesome poet, lol, yes you can call yourself that.

    Sam

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