Confusion

by Patrik   Aug 9, 2005


Stop and wait,
Let me understand,
First you want a time out,
You broke my heart,
Then I broke my hand,
Now you want me back,
And you think I can?

I love you so deep,
Get that in your mind,
But I can't stand this,
Are you just playing with me,
Are you toying with my mind?

You said you loved me,
Then you walked away,
You say you hate me,
Then you want me back,
Your feelings are so messed up,
It's hard to keep track.

Please just leave me alone,
It's hurts to say hear it I know,
But I can't live with you,
I'll be in constant doubt,
So just walk out that door,
And keep walking away,
I want you here deep inside,
But I need to save my last pride.

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  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    very nice flow and i liked your word choice to describe your feelings and thoughts. i can definitely related. nice job!!

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Aw i like this poem, it's really well written.
    Well Done !!!

    <3 Charli XxXxXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox

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