To partake. (Trois-par-Huit)

by Steven Beesley   Aug 15, 2005


Stars glimmers
The tranquil lake shimmers
Serenading trees by the lake shore

The moon that shines so brightly, like forever more
Nearby, find the stream, the brook and the lonely moor

Shadows cascading upon the lake
My breath away to take
To partake

Trois-par-Huit:
A poem containing 3 stanzas of 3, 2 and 3 lines. 8 lines in total with a syllable count of 3-6-9-12-12-9-6-3. The rhyming pattern is AAB BB CCC.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kara !

    Incredible work Steven. I find Trois-par-Huit's pretty hard, but you've made it look so easy.
    You've created some beautiful imagery. I completely adore this piece. x

  • 16 years ago

    by jaki

    i still don't know how you do it! another amazing poem

    *jackie*

  • 16 years ago

    by jaki

    i still don't know how you do it! another amazing poem

    *jackie*