Hidden behind the Tears

by XxTeArSxX17   Aug 21, 2005


NO NAME

The glisten in my eyes
the tears are building up inside
and soon I will no longer be able to hide.

And when the night comes
rivers is what I cry.
My heart is broken and there’s
so many reasons why

I cant take the pain.
I hate that feeling that I am ready to die.
I am so young yet I feel as thought
I can no longer hold on.

I’ve been faking for far to longer.
Everything you see of me is a disguise
I put on so you cant see the real me.

everything i'm is everything I lack.
You name it I most likely don’t have.
And as I look back to see where I lost it all,
I’m trying to find out what I did wrong,
but for a person who can see I must be blind
I cant find nothing, but I still cant leave it behind.

By ~Ashleigh~
8/21/2005

thanks for the name help you all.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Really wonderful! I loved it!

  • Really good poem, but still really sad.
    You've expressed yourself well though. 5/5

    XxXxX Cici XxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this this was really good the first stanza was my favvvvorite i loved it

    I cant find nothing

    that should be i can find nothing or i cant find anything

    great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    I adore your writting... again well done

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Wow this poem was really touching...the only thing i didnt understand was the first line in the last stanza....it didnt make sence to me
    but still excellent job 5/5