by Letty Aug 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Dear Daddy, |
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I love how you stood up for not only yourself but for your mom as well. i like the way you write |
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Family realtionships/breakups are a very senstive poems and can be very depressing. howver i feel that even tho this poem is sad you have put abit of humour init towards the end mayb to say that even tho he has left u are still goin to carry on. i think that was a really good technique and you really do deserve this poem toi be awarded. u really are a good poet :) |
by Letty
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THANK YOU |
by Spitfire
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5/5 *** |
by Spitfire
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GREAT JOB !!!! |