Dear Daddy

by Letty   Aug 26, 2005


Dear Daddy,
When mommy said that you had left us, I
always thought you would come back . I
didn't think you would move on, and start
your own family or forget about the
children you have . I used to be wrapped
around your finger, I couldn't see no
wrong in you . But when you started breaking
my heart ,and not caring, I finally realized
the truth . You used me to get what you
wanted from her, you made me believe that
she didn't have a care for me, that you
were the only one who could give me love .
But it's all over now, this master and
puppet relationship is through .
I don't want to say good-bye because that
would be wrong . So I'm saying peace out,
So long .

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  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I love how you stood up for not only yourself but for your mom as well. i like the way you write

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥*Jodie*♥

    Family realtionships/breakups are a very senstive poems and can be very depressing. howver i feel that even tho this poem is sad you have put abit of humour init towards the end mayb to say that even tho he has left u are still goin to carry on. i think that was a really good technique and you really do deserve this poem toi be awarded. u really are a good poet :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    THANK YOU

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    5/5 ***

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    GREAT JOB !!!!

    i love that!!

    its so good !!

    i have poems about my dad
    I FEEL UE PAIN !!
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