Tell Me I'm Wrong

by Arty   Sep 18, 2005


The end comes clear
with a scar and a tear
tell me I'm wrong when i say
i should just give up on you
i should give up
my dreams aren't coming true

when all strings come undone
i will make a move
the only one
when all is said and done
watch me fade away
so please tell me I'm wrong when i say
you can't stay
you'll be so far away
but i will wait for you forever

the end comes here
with a kiss and a tear

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  • 18 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    That was a really great poem....keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    That was a really great poem....keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by HεartxOfxGlass

    Omg! its so purty....hehehe u have some talent dude! although you don't seem like the person that would write that poetry....but your poem rox! keep it up!

    5/5

    Much Luvz,
    ~Almost Pεrfεct~

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    This is such a great poem, i love it, you are a great writer, keep on writing it does help when you want to get everything out! can you please check out my 2 poems a life of total unhappiness and goodbye everyone (4 real) please comment (and vote!) on them it would mean alot! mwah if u need someone to talk to im here luv always maddison xxx

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