Keep me from fallen
by shawn hoskins Sep 20, 2005
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You were always there when i began to fall,you're always there to answer my calls,you stood by me when no one would,you'd do anything for me if you could,when i go to my dark place everything lights up when i see your face,you keep me grounded and u put me in my place,keeping me from fallen further from gods good grace.i thank you for helping me stay straight,your the only one i can go to who i can relate. |
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18 years ago
by N J Thornton
Aww any friend would be honoured to read this I'm sure. Friends, real friends, are rare to have, but when you have them it's like nothing else. Good job.
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18 years ago
by Jamie
I really liked this one i felt it would be better in a four lined stanza format....
when i go to my dark place everything lights up when i see your face
that was my most favorite part
im not completly sure i could be totally wrong let me know....it kinda sounded like the *who* at the end should have been *whom* no biggie it just kinda flowed weird i thought but i suck at grammer so i could be way off...
amazing job, 5/5 -
18 years ago
by Amanda
I did like this one.... keep it up
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18 years ago
by Andrea
Wow, i seriouslly really liked it. theres something different in this poem, like i read alot of stuff like this but yours is really good. awesome job.
