Confused Heart

by ShhhhItsASecret©   Sep 20, 2005


How can you say you love me,
When you can't even trust me?

If the love you feel is true,
Then you have to trust me too!

I love you more than you know,
Where you lead, my heart will go.

I want to lie in your arms,
and be soothed by your sweet charms.

Please just trust that I need you,
I WILL NOT FIND SOMEONE NEW!

You are my one and only,
Without you, I am lonely.

©2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Short and sweet. great work again. very heartfelt. loved it

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Williams

    This poems is so good, I wish I had your talent. Great job.5/5....

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Again, a little simple vernacularly, but your point is well understood and your scheme is intact.

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Aww, great job! I say 4/5 on this one, it's pretty good. The wording might be rough around the lonely part, I'll agree. But it's still a cute poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Aww, that's sooo cute! 4/5. It flowed and rymed, but it needs slight adjustment in the lonely part. I don't know why, but it just seemed to weaken the rest of the poem. perhaps re-wording it would make it better?

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