Confused Heart

by BeeJay   Sep 20, 2005


How can you say you love me,
When you can't even trust me?

If the love you feel is true,
Then you have to trust me too!

I love you more than you know,
Where you lead, my heart will go.

I want to lie in your arms,
and be soothed by your sweet charms.

Please just trust that I need you,
I WILL NOT FIND SOMEONE NEW!

You are my one and only,
Without you, I am lonely.

© 2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 20 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Short and sweet. great work again. very heartfelt. loved it

    Ruby

  • 20 years ago

    by Jason Williams

    This poems is so good, I wish I had your talent. Great job.5/5....

  • 20 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Again, a little simple vernacularly, but your point is well understood and your scheme is intact.

  • 20 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Aww, great job! I say 4/5 on this one, it's pretty good. The wording might be rough around the lonely part, I'll agree. But it's still a cute poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Aww, that's sooo cute! 4/5. It flowed and rymed, but it needs slight adjustment in the lonely part. I don't know why, but it just seemed to weaken the rest of the poem. perhaps re-wording it would make it better?

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