I'm Not Okay

by ShhhhItsASecret©   Jul 23, 2006


You see my smile,
But not my eyes
You hear my laughs,
But not my cries

You think I'm happy,
Never sad.
You think my life
Is not that bad.

But you don't know,
What lies inside.
And you don't know,
All that I hide.

I say I'm fine,
With no delay.
But truthfully,
I'm not okay.

© 2006 Brandy Dorr

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  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Brandy --
    For such a short poem, this really held a lot of emotion. I thought the rhyming and the flow was perfect. And no worries, I can definitely relate to this. It`s kind of short so there`s not much to comment on ;; but it was great. Keep this up. 5/5.

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 17 years ago

    by Brannon Bridge

    I like it...I wrote somethin similar to this...good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    Thats exactly how i feel right now. Every word related to my life. Take care. Would love you to comment on any of mine. 5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by kia

    Thats exactly how i feel right now. Every word related to my life. Take care. Would love you to comment on any of mine. 5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ♥~тσяи-χ-ƒσяєνєя~♥ღ

    Wow!
    i do like this one. it has a easy flow to it and it does make you think.
    :)
    keep safe and such. xx

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