Say hello to heaven for me

by shawn hoskins   Sep 20, 2005


Say hello to heaven for me,your gone to a better place i see,your life cut short i guess it just wasn't meant to be,you got your wings i know your flying,you left me here deep inside crying,i know the angel's will be smiling when they see your face,i hope you find peace in that beautiful place,your time on earth was hard i see,all i ask is say hello to heaven for me.

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  • 15 years ago

    by munkee04

    It doesnt matter that you dont write your poems in stanzas, it is still very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. that was so sweet, it got me in tears.. i reli lykd the idea of the poem, and the fact that it was a short poem, made it all the more sweeter.. i loved it and ur rhyme was in place
    keep it up
    take care

  • This almost made me cry
    thanks for all your comments
    this is beautiful!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Beautifully written, i enjoyed reading it ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I really liked this one, very sweet indeed. I also liked the rhyming, it flowed well. Well done.

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